Thursday, October 4, 2007@6:27 AM

花样少男少女2 [注定的爱]Chinese fic

written by: H Panda
reviewed by:~微柔~
1* Title – 4/5
As the title was same as the HANA KIMI!It's good that you add in your title!Just the title a bit weird!

2* Forewords – 10/10
Short and neat!In fact,the characters no need any introduction!As every people that watched hana kimi knows that!But good for you to add in some characters!You are good enough to disclaim and explain why you wrote this.

3* Appearance – 10/10
The background and poster are nice!If has a really special feel!I can see the words very clearly~!You make the colour combination so good!

4* Originality and Creativity – 13/15
You really didn't just continue from the story!You changed the Ending and make the whole story into another story feeling!

5* Plot – 13/15
Your plot really surprised me anyway!Adding Selina,Hebe and Aaron in the story is good,but you must make sure that you them in a form of good way!

6* Story Flow – 10/10
Your story go very smoothly!

7* Language: (Spelling, Grammar) – 13/15
There are some mistake of Chinese words like 动西 and 牛仔群!

8* Writing Style – 10/10
I like the way of short paragraph and Speeches form!

9* Reader Friendly – 10/10
Very friendly indeed!You have put a lot of personal comments and explaination!

Total: 93 Marks
Bonus: 0/3(the link you gave has nothing to do with that story and you aren't going to continue the story.)