Thursday, August 30, 2007@9:43 PM

The Former Tenant is a Jackass
Story By: JiShin
Review By: WZ

1* Title – 4/5
The title is VERY attractive. Lol. I’d definitely click on it if I were scrolling Winglin. However, isn’t this story also about JJ and the others? I realize that Eugene was the main character but…yeah. Heh. I really like the title though.
2* Forewords – 8.5/10
You foreword was really good. Though there wasn’t a character description, the prologue part was definitely eye-catching. It was so…sentimental and personal. =D
3* Appearance – 7.5/10
The background is awesome =D. I stop to look at it almost on every page. –Drools– Hahaha. The poster was a bit plain and I think you could have included a picture of Eugene too. But the pages were easy to read with the background and font contrasting. Unlike some other stories, I have to highlight the text because the font color was so bright.
4* Originality and Creativity – 14/15
Honestly, this one was one of the original stories I’ve read, though I see certain resemblances with other stories, like how at least one of the DBSK falls in love with a non-celebrity girl and so forth. I really like it though. –Thumbs up– Good job!!
5* Plot – 15/15
Okay, I loved this plot. You don’t know how many times I either dropped silent tears at how sentimental some parts were. In other parts, I was just laughing and laughing. It was a great plot.
6* Story Flow – 9.5/10
This was very easy to read and so I didn’t get lost. Honestly, I really enjoyed how you made it easy to recognize when you were switching scenes. But…the Korean parts sort of stop the flow at times, because you often have to explain it afterwards. I ended up just reading the brackets.
7* Language: (Spelling, Grammar) – 14/15
I think you used VERY descriptive language and great grammar, some that even I don’t understand. Wink? Care to explain how long/short of a time period that is to sleep? XD Honestly, your spelling was great. There were scarcely any so I won’t go and pull them out.
8* Writing Style – 9/10
I love your writing style. It’s easy to understand and follow. But just like I said before, the Korean language parts were a bit distractive. (Though I do appreciate them =D)
9* Reader Friendly – 10/10
You reply to your readers’ comments and everything and you have Author’s Notes as well. I think that really does keep your readers tuned in. Great job =D

Total: 91.5/100
Bonus: 0/3 (Sorry, no link in your forewords)

Other comments:
I really loved your story!!!! It’s so great!!!! It’s very sweet and touching. Made my tears drop a load of times. Heh. You’re a talented writer! Please continue! Hopefully one day, I’ll find a novel written by you in the bookstore! Continue continue! FIGHT!!! Lol